Open book

when i was reading a book i got lost in thoughts of you

Open book

 

As I look into your eyes I read through the pages.

Word by word, as I get lost in your eyes.

The beauty of the ink of your paper overwhelms me.

The scars on your skin devastates me

Going through the chapters of your intriguing story.

As I am reading the last chapters

It’s as clear as the tears that roll down on your red cheeks like the frost leaves falling down in autumn.

 

You are an open book

Everybody could see it.

Everybody but me.

 

-L.D.C

 

 

Author's Note

please let me know what you think.
and if you notice some grammar problems, please tell me about them i would like to improve my writing skills.

Reviews

[Deanna M.]

This was such a good poem!! I really like the last line in the first stanza. That's a really nice comparison from the tear to the leaves falling down in autumn. Thank you for sharing!!

[theshygirl]

Thank you sooomuchh

[A hare off]

I really liked this, the theme is so good. "Everybody but me". That final line says it all.

I believe in the fourth line devastates should be devastate.

[theshygirl]

thank you so muchh! also thanks for the pointing out my grammar mistake!

[TheMalady]

Aw... How melancholic! It's overflowing of emotions! Love it! Thanks for sharing this poem! :)

[theshygirl]

thank you so much :)

[TheMalady]

You're very welcome! :)