TWIDDLE

TWIDDLE

A Poem by christine zapanta andes
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cast each myrtle
vines of subtle
edging grasp
that sways of lasting songs are
forever twined
in the midnight rain.


is this smile of 
flowing trust
that eve of lost
 kindness are rested
upon your palm?

sigh, in the vanished 
snow of dried leaves 
until beginnings are
made to END. 




© 2016 christine zapanta andes



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A pressing piece that shares beauty and timeless wording, well done, good read.

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This is beautiful! I love it and I'm keeping it :)

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This poetry never ends as chanting the universal saga of nature and life. Thank you for portraying a vivid landscape through your touchy creation of words.

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christine zapanta andes

1 Year Ago

thank you for the kind read sir
It's been a long time since I reviewed. I like the beginning but the ending stuck with me more.
"sigh, in the vanished
snow of dried leaves
until beginnings are
made to END." It reminds me of a sunset. Overall I enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing this with me.

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Posted 1 Year Ago


christine zapanta andes

1 Year Ago

thank you for the review :)
I loved the beginning.
"cast each myrtle
vines of subtle
edging grasp
that sways of lasting songs are
forever twined
in the midnight rain."
They could stand alone. The poem had meaningful words and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



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christine zapanta andes

1 Year Ago

thank you for the review :)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Christine.

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