The lights go out

in the shiniest veil 

of a tender night

We all go down

just the same

the struggling father

after a long day

the youthful woman

staring a peace of mind

the lonely child

turning around in bed

the relocated family

finding warmth on a cold day

Your physician

fought cancer tonight

A teacher wrote 

down his memories

The artist threw 

a splash of paint 

a George

that gave up Jane

All lights go out

just the same

The witty writer

puts down his pen

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the flow of thoughts and the good ending.
"The witty writer
puts down his pen"
The above lines are true. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Nisreen]

Thank you So much C

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Einstein Noodle]

the witty writer puts down his pen indeed! ...love these glimpses of humanity settling down for the night ... simple and real and beautiful!
E.

[Nisreen]

Thank you E .......

[A.marie.speaks]

Beautiful simplicity in the realization that we are all sharing the same world, the same days. This piece gave me a chance to reflect on this idea and find comfort in it. Thanks for sharing!

[Nisreen]

Thank You for your kind review

[thetish]

We are all made of the same flesh and blood. All human beings. So true. Thanks. T

[Nisreen]

Thank you T

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Beautiful.
Interesting perspective that kind of leaves you with a feeling of finality but hope as well.
Great piece.
I enjoyed it!

[Nisreen]

Thanks Jyoti ..... tons of smiles over here

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome. Happy to see smiles!

[James]

And all things must come to an end, the good things and the bad. Very nice, kind of sad, but I liked it.

[Nisreen]

Thank you James :)

[Richard Patrick]

Thank you. The piece is very neat, I am very impressed by your work.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Richard .....

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

We all have to charge our batteries at night to go further the next day. Well done, Curiosity. :) Rudi

[Nisreen]

Thank You Rudi

[.]

A lovely theme.......

At the end of the day, when the lights go out, when all is said and done, battles fought, sometimes won.....we all lay our heads down to sleep and hope to rest in peace and happiness, always ready to wake the next morning and take up the reins on our lives again.

A very interesting poem, Nisreen. A poem like the daily stories of all our lives. Neat work.

[Nisreen]

If one Held à Window to my soul .... You do With this review !!!

[Elmarie]

Very interesting poem. Keep up the good work

Blessings

El

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your kind visit