A Poem by Victoria

Your a man who needs a woman's love, any woman will do, as long as she acts like she loves you. You cry and wonder why your love burns so fast maybe it's because she didn't love you back.
Your a man who needs a woman's love any woman will do, as long as she acts like she loves you. The woman your seeking is gone, you shut her out now your forever searching for a woman, who doesn't love you back.

© 2017 Victoria

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Simple and relatable I enjoyed this short poem as its about a topic that i focus ALOT on my profile. I love the diction.

Posted 6 Months Ago

Its true, men dont know when to stop and think of how to become better than they are. And any woman can eat away at their heart with no remorse

Posted 8 Months Ago

This poem hits me, it touches me too. Many can relate to this man. It's kinda like the song Two Out Of Three Ain't Bad by Meatloaf. But you put things beautifully with your words, simple yet to the point, powerful and poetic. Tyfs!!!

Posted 9 Months Ago

The voice of the heart seems burned and blistered here, wanting to be loved, but lingering in the emptiness of a lover left behind. So powerful.

Posted 10 Months Ago

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Added on August 19, 2017
Last Updated on August 19, 2017



reedley, CA

im a 18 years old and I love simple poetry. more..

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