Finding herself

Finding herself

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze





Jiggling down the lane, she laughs

She laughs so hard that she cries

 

Running down the lane, she falls 

She falls so hard that she flies

 

Stumbling across it, she finds

Finds something deep, she loses

 

 Desperate for breath, she binds

She binds so tight that she frees

 

As a free spirit she rise

Rises so sure that nothing defies.







 

© 2016 Jyoti_Ablaze


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Jyoti_Ablaze
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This is beautiful, snaking lines which contradicts its own fate. Flow is glorious and so id the design. Wonderful stuff this one

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jyoti_Ablaze

11 Months Ago

Thank you very much!
It's short and sweet. Good use and flow of the words. Nicely written

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jyoti_Ablaze

11 Months Ago

Thank you very much!
Wow! Reading this just made me happy for some reason and I couldn't help but smile at the beauty of these words flowing freely yet leaving a lasting imprint on the mind. Well written! :)

PS: I loved the picture ;)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Arshia! This means a lot! :)
As usual I drifted in your words, nice and delicate poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Salvatore. :)
Sometimes I wonder how do you manage to express the life in these words. I mean it so deep and sometimes we don't think about these side of coin... She fell so hard she flies... Yeah yo do flies my friend

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you Deepak. We writers do have a knack to see stuff other than the ordinary, don't we? :)
sh va

2 Years Ago

Your welcome dear!
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Cute piece. Keep up the good work

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
This is a superb piece, I must say... I loved the harmony your words created! Good work ☺

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much, YumnaKay. Glad you visited!
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

You are welcome, Jyoti! A pleasure :)
I loved this! As said by others, I really liked the juxtaposition of the lines. They really contrast to one another that makes for me an enjoyable read. Also the content helps. I am a free spirit so this poem resonated deeply within me.

Good job.

Thanks for posting!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words.
I am glad it resonated with your spirit!
Good day!
Well, Im glad I came back at a good time to read this beauty of writing. I loved how it unwrapped total opposites in the actions itself. Very good, keep it up

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

I am glad that you visited and enjoyed my work.
Absolutely beautifully written! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Gullia!

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