Empty apartment.

Empty apartment.

A Poem by Matt
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Life really sucks right now.

"
I start with a question.
Just to let you know.
To bring up the past.
Let the unfulfilled,
The empty emotions show.

White and black words.
Lyrics with out the melody.
A chorus that was broken from the bridge.
Broken black guitar, Just another wasted tree.

Useless.
I always used to be.
Writing dreams of a hope that kill.
Daily scars, some wounds never heal.
 
Run away with me under a never ending sky.
We don't have to realize till tomorrow,
That its just a love forged from regret.
So stay with me, Make believe...
Fake it all.
Sweet autumn green eyed girls never forget.

Just for one day,
Dream with me.
Sleep in my arms.
With once understanding hands.
Try and remember how we used to be.

Another rainy day beneath deep red eyes.
The grass is green, the sky is blue.
Why can't the obvious be just like you.
Lie to me and forget whats true.

The truth shouldn't be so far away.
A distant thought to cut you down everyday.
Dilated eyes forgive your words.
I asked you a question and I already know..
what you intently premeditated to say.

Regret nothing... and everything.






© 2010 Matt



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You have superb talent, the ending was perfect.
"I asked you a question and I already know..
what you intently premeditated to say."
^^ Fave Lines, don't we all come to have this literal part in life, already knwoing the answer to our unasked question, yet wanting to hear it to allow ourselves to realize reality. I liked this piece, a lot. Flared emotions skectched in every line. Uh who am i kidding, this piece was simply awesome :)

Cheers for The Read :)
indie♥

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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So so sorry I couldn't review this sooner. I think I've 'said' this before, but you have mad talent. My favorite line: Regret nothing... and everything. Sticks out to me because I'm sure a lot of people have felt this way, and overall it's true.
Amazing poem and beautifully written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


"Useless.
I always used to be.
Writing dreams of a hope that kill.
Daily scars, some wounds never heal."

Damn, good write... I'm feeling this. Lots of emotion coming from this. Hope things are looking up for you. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This was nicely written. I liked it. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love this poem, because it's deep. I love how you really don't care about anything, but just to be with her. It's romantic and vulnerable at the same time. I also like the writing style!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Run away with me under a never ending sky.
We don't have to realize till tomorrow,
That its just a love forged from regret.

Great poem. I can almost feel the struggle for love and the memories that bind the two together. Nice.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I imagine this as something that explains the emotions in this one song, its called Room of Angel by Silent Hill 4. Try reading your poem to this. Its quite interesting.

You did a wonderful job. I applaud you.
Rain

Posted 7 Years Ago


You have superb talent, the ending was perfect.
"I asked you a question and I already know..
what you intently premeditated to say."
^^ Fave Lines, don't we all come to have this literal part in life, already knwoing the answer to our unasked question, yet wanting to hear it to allow ourselves to realize reality. I liked this piece, a lot. Flared emotions skectched in every line. Uh who am i kidding, this piece was simply awesome :)

Cheers for The Read :)
indie♥

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This had me sit back and think.
just think, random thoughts.
This was a powerful piece full of emotions.


Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow this one was really good bro, extremely full of tons of emotion. I could honestly feel every line cutting through me.

Posted 7 Years Ago


this is a really really good poem. it seems rather sad, doesn't it? but i think that was your point. i love how you went into detail about the little things and i can tell how much longing is in these words. overall good job.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Fort Worth, TX



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