Darkness III

Darkness III

A Chapter by Pax
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My heart fell

from the sky
down to the
darkness
it fall.

Now i got used
to not seeing
much of 
anything
despite
the dimness
of the faint light 
i still have.


© 2016 Pax



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Not wanting to see completes the blindness.
Powerful piece!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Within the shadows dim light still shines,Good expression;-]

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

we must light our own way, today, I bought myself flowers :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You still have that light and that is hope.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

1 Year Ago

Thanks, pretty friend.
On a moonless night
I always look for the stars
Like i count my blessings
In my darkest night. :) :) :)



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

1 Year Ago

Tahnks gab....a very positive reponsive piece...

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Tags: #emo, #darkness, #lonesome, #writing, #space, #life, #journal


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Pax
Pax

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