Misty Blue

Misty Blue

A Poem by wordman
"

gold in the one way love contest

"

It`s been  a long time baby!

you were on my mind

thought I would drop you a line


You know baby!

I`m still in love with you

and on day`s like this honey

I just feel misty blue


Baby it`s been a long time

since I held you tight

and I hope this letter

finds you all right


You know baby that I miss you

and I dream of you from time to time

and on those day`s honey

I have to drop you a line


But then I tear them up

and I throw them away

I wouldn't know where to mail

them to any way....

© 2016 wordman


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Sounds like someone really means a lot to you.
This is sad, but sweet at the same time.
A nice read. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

thank you again
I saw Millie Jackson in 98 when she was all the rage and trust me, she had a pretty raunchy
stage persona. 98 Wasn't that many years ago but it was long enough ago to make most
of the female audience blush with her gyrations and her permissive remarks. She was great!

I like your more tame rendition wordman..thanks for sharing....dana

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

thank you and your right
Great piece, nice flow and sweet sentiment!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

thanks for the visit my friend
Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Welcome friend:)
I like this. It's genuine in form and in truth. It's clear that someone is special to you.
A good, heartfelt write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
oooh what a song you've picked for this one wordman!
I was reading along, enjoying the feel of this poem and the last line hit me hard. no, I'm not a wimp. it's old age, my friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

thanks woody,tell me about it
That was very simple and direct to the point, i loved the longing in that and the simplicity you delivered your sweet message with. that was very beautiful work my friend :)
Keep it coming :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

thank you for the visit,i am a simple writer, every body can understand and relate
I remember that song...but I'm not a romantic. Sweet and sad...

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

sure you are, you just forgot thank you
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These words are a nice accompaniment to that fabulous song. Old romantic that I am, I wouldn't mind a sweet serenade like that.

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

thanks for the visit my friend
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Added on March 28, 2015
Last Updated on July 30, 2016
Tags: won 2nd place in the one way lov

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 wordman
wordman

hixson, TN



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