You

it's about someone very special to me

I almost gave up on meeting mister right

But when I met you that changed everything

Months increased, my heart would beat

All because of you

Yeah, I can definitely say I’m falling in love with you

I’ll spend the next two years wondering if you ever knew

But here I am praying I will get a chance with you

Hoping this story doesn’t end

Praying that I don’t change

Hoping the love I have burning within doesn’t die

I see myself in two years telling the man I love that  I love him

I see a return missionary that is different, but still the same

That day or night will either be the most incridble night of my life or the worst

But if it is the worst I know it will only hurt in my mind and heart

Because the man I have fallen for will do everything he can to not make me feel bad

I pray in these two years we grow closer

For this to be the first page of thousands of chapters in our lives

When I met you I didn’t realize you would be the one I have been waiting

Please don’t let someone else fall in love with you

Please don’t be in love with someone else

I want you to be first thing I see everyday for the rest of my life

I want you to be last kiss

A billion people are on the earth

There are fifty states, a lot of oceans

And I was lucky enough to find you.

Author's Note

this is about someone very special to me.
Poem partially inspired by Christina Perri('s) "A Thousand Years" and Taylor Swift('s)
"Enchanted"

Reviews

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

this is so emotional! i love it :)

[Aly]

thank you :)
You read "Every Drop" this is about the same guy :-)

[Lucy Morningstar ♥]

thats really cool :)

[Aly]

thank you :) :) :)

[scripted]

lovely write... nice job:) yours truely danielle (scripted)

[Phillitup]

Eloquent....I like it! :)

[Aly]

Thank you! Much appericated! :)

[Phillitup]

Of course! I apologize for the size of the review...so small! I guess I just don't have much to say about this one!

[Aly]

It's alright! Thank you for reading and reviewing.

[michael.c.m]

desire defined eloquently - "I want you to be last kiss", speaks to a final passion. Excellent thoughts here.

[Aly]

thank you. Sorry it was orginally suppose to be "I want you to be my last kiss" but thank you :)

[InsanityWriter]

So sweet. :) Nice job. ^_^

[Aly]

Thank you :)

[jennilouhoo]

Perfect! Describes the situation to a T! Totally relatable!

[Aly]

Awesome! Thank you! :D

[Aly]

Just an update for everyone, I told him how I felt about him. So this is kinda old. This was written right before I admitted my feelings. But thank you for all the postive feedback! Truly appericate it all, and each and everyone one of you who took the time to read it and review it. Thank you! Happy Holidays everybody! :)

[s y e]

Firstly, I love the songs! :-)
Secondly, this was amazing!! I loved it. Well done

[Aly]

me too!
Whenever I am writing, this is always a song I am listening to and I usually give credit to the people who helped my inspiriation. Thank you very much! :)

[s y e]

I know what you mean! Specific songs just give that extra 'boost' :-)
Amazing

[Aly]

Exactly! :)

[s y e]

;-)

[Aly]

:D

[KeeD]

"For this to be the first page of thousands of chapters in our lives"
beautiful.. very well penned, the flow was excellent, the emotion always felt. Great write

[Aly]

Thank you so much! Greatly appericated! :)

[KeeD]

Hey hope it all works out with this guy, he's def going to be like "hell yes" because you seem pretty cool to pass on.

[Aly]

Thanks! I hope it all works out too :)

[zainul]

What an enchanting write!
I read and got spellbound.
Hope your aspiration comes true.

[Aly]

Thank you. Greatly appericated.

[zainul]

You are welcome,passionate poetess!