Perceived Perception

Blame it on Andrew

I was considering the perception

of my expectations of what I have perceived.

Then after consideration of my perceived,

perceptions of the expectations,

I changed my expectations perceived,

so my perceptions would not interfere.

With any of my perceived,

expectations that were a perception. 

Reviews

[Blackheart]

This is truly an amazing piece sir. So much meaning embedded deep within the layers of words you have used. Loved it!

[Willard Wells]

Well, the meaning is embedded. So deeply that when I finished the piece, I did not know which was the beginning and what was the end. Since the beginning and end do seem to end up back at the beginning, but, of course, the beginning never really went anywhere.

Thank you for taking the time to stroll some of the strangeness that can be my mind. Hurry back.

[Rachael Lea]

Very witty! I like this very much, it's catchy and fun and very good advice for anyone to take Great job!

[Willard Wells]

Witty or crazy. I accept all. Thank you for visiting my jumbled adventure and appreciate the kind words.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Like words tumbling through a maze, this poem circles like a merry-go-round, dizzying at times, but always stopping on point. Very nice.

[Willard Wells]

I have had it banging around in my head in different sorts for a bit and finally thought I'd give it a twist and see what came out at the other end. Thank you for playing my goof today.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it all comes down to taking life as it comes, and flowing with it...savoring each moment rather than wishing for some particular thing, the next.

love the wordplay...

j.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for traveling in the excursion within my mind this day. Pick pick up a copy of the home game, coming to a store near you soon. Peace Out.

[Scrap]

This is so cool! And a good lesson too!

[Willard Wells]

I go back to read it and it still hurts my head. Thank you for visiting my jumbled mind today.

[Scrap]

I love jumbles....

Makes u 'pronounce your 'p's' properly' :))))...lots of spitting! Haha

[Willard Wells]

I had not looked at it that way. Thanks for the extra laugh. It's nice to find out something new about your work.

[andrew mitchell]

hahahahahahahahahaha Willard this is fantastic! LMAO You're coming around to my thinking with the twists and turns that end up at the beginning of your write in the conclusion hahaha. If only I wrote this!!!! Thanks Willard for the laugh and the smile! I didn't expect this GEM! haha!:):):)

[Willard Wells]

Well, I have been bouncing the perceived, perception idea in my head for a bit. After your writing, I thought I would see how the process would work. I had to work fast as always before I over thought it and got a headache.

I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the kind words.

[andrew mitchell]

Yes you do have to write it down in one take or else it can give you a headache lol.