Sweet Peaches (Tanka)

Words of love

dancing in the moon

glow reflecting on my night

with my love in life

arms holding close while kisses

find the taste of sweet peaches

Reviews

[Jesse W.]

Quite the romantic poem you've written, something sweet to wash down the doldrums of life. Excellent poem, I enjoyed it a lot :)

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for reading my words and I am glad you enjoyed. My life is that sweet every day.

[softlyfall]

What a wonderful delight, sweet peach kisses. I hope this is a valentine for the love of your life.

[Willard Wells]

Well, it will be a secondary or just another day of loving her. My Valentine 2016 is what I wrote for her and will read to her tomorrow. She does not understand all of my writing, but I don't always either. :)

[Mary Helda]

Beautiful,magical and enchanting..i love the way you play around with words,,so effortless

[Willard Wells]

Mary, thank you so much for your kind words. You are too kind.

[Mary Helda]

You are welcome

[alifeacoustic]

Beautiful words Willard, perfectly captured. Could almost taste those peaches :)

[Willard Wells]

I am glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate the review.

[David Scott]

Reminds me of springtime... I have always found peaches to bring a very sensual experience to the palate.
Great capture of this culinary delight. The implications are more than abundantly clear. :)

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for stopping by David. Appreciate the kind words.