A Poem by .SaveSydney!.

About my needing and wanting to write; but not finding the words.. Read&Review. :D


I need to write,

To create something wonderful!

I need to hear

The scratch of the pencil.

I need to see

My words on a page.

So why,

Must I be so...



© 2010 .SaveSydney!.

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Honest opinions; I'll return the favor. :D

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It looks to me like you found the words! :D

It's funny how not having something to write or having a mental block can actually inspire written work. Excellent write for something so simple.

I think I'll leave the rest of this blank...

Posted 8 Years Ago

I know the feeling. I go to the old writers to open my mind and make the pen work. The poem was short and to the point. The battle to open the mind will never end. Just relax and think of something you like and was good in your life. A excellent poem. Poem was good. You made your point.


Posted 8 Years Ago

Funny, I feel the same exact way in this poem. Every word reminds me of me. It's very nice and simple. And that is what I love about it! Excellent write.

Posted 8 Years Ago

wonderful insightful little poetic note of meditative action~

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is a good poem. I'm having trouble writing...too. Haha i have a lot of ideas, but they are mostly for books. Poetry different story. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on July 28, 2010
Last Updated on July 28, 2010



On The Dance Floor In, GA

Hai; the name's Sydney. But i'm sure you figured that much out already. Hah; i don't consider myself an epic writer, it's just something i do a lot. I'm very music oriented, mostly techcore, crunk.. more..


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