Lonely Astronaut

Lonely Astronaut

A Poem by Anastasia Purvis

Deep In Outer Space
He Takes His Chances, Fearless
Free Falling, Alone 

© 2017 Anastasia Purvis



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Essence of Major Tom (older people will get the reference) I feel you have captured the image and emotion as it truly must be with that first step out of the space-capsule and into the void. Well done and worth 100 or five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! my rate system :~)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bear

8 Months Ago

I was at Blue Oyster Cult when they toured with the first laser light show. When they ran the laser .. read more
Anastasia Purvis

7 Months Ago

Wow, man. You are seriously so lucky.
Bear

7 Months Ago

I grew up in a great time for music lovers and poets as most coffee shops and many restaurants had r.. read more



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Ty
Direct and honest. Great piece.

Posted 6 Months Ago


wonderful piece. The image of an astronaut alone in the vast space was really captured. Captivating..

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Terrifying, exciting, sad, picturesque all in one. Loving it.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A long story condensed in 17 syllables. Leaves some room for thoughts of what would he see if the falling comes to an end! Sadly no matter it is a magnificent planet or endless pitfall waiting for him, he's still alone...

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice use of words. Took reader to space and a free-fall. I liked this poem. Thank you Anastasia for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


WHAT THE WRITE GOOD DEEP HELL

Posted 7 Months Ago


True definition of freedom if you ask me.

Posted 7 Months Ago


So little, but so much said. Goosebumps is all I can say, Great job.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Space oddity and a scifi fantasy going into the great beyond. A beautiful mixture of space and spectacular control and restraint.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: Astronaut, space, outers pace, alone, lonely, xosassystaceox, sassystace, haiku, poem, poet, poetry, writer, writing

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Anastasia Purvis
Anastasia Purvis

Cincinnati *The Queen City*, OH



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Altruistic Enigmatic Polymath | Writer, Vegetarian, Musician, EMT. I'm an Artist. I paint pictures of the verbal kind. ♕ The Queen City ♛ more..

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