We are Human

We are Human

A Poem by potato

We are human,
We make mistakes,
We are not perfect.

People will laugh,
People will hate,
Don't worry what they think.

 You are not fat,
You are curvy.

You are not stupid,
You are your own genius,
Others just don't see it.

You are not messy,
You just have your
Own way of organizing.

Embrace your,
Body,
mind,
personality,
   Flaws.
You are,
Beautiful,
Amazing,
Wonderful,
Different,
Special,
Loved,
You.
Always remember that.

© 2015 potato


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true words that are full of meaning, short, simple but true..

Posted 8 Years Ago


inspiring piece, I really like how it speaks to embrace your flaws...
Thank you for sharing
bill

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is a well written poem. I like the format style. I seen one grammatical mistake the line which reads You are you're own genius, ---should read, you are (your) own genius instead of (you're)/ you're is a contraction (your) in this case is describing something)..but other than that
it is a very nice poem..maria

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this poem, I really like it a lot :)
The way you've portrayed our flaws and emotions is really unique but you also provide at the end hope fo all of us. Great poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this poem, it is full of positive energy. And it is also speaks to me. There are times i feel very different from others; my tastes in things are so parallel to what others call normal. So it kinda reassures me that it is okay to be different. It is okay to just be me and enjoy life (as long as my being me doesn't interfere with the rights and the well-being of other people of course).

It is a beautiful piece. And I like the ending, #happy ending.

Thank you for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice! Like how you made your structure fit the poem. We easily forget or seemingly deny our humanity.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on August 14, 2015
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Tags: human, teen, flaws, fat, beautiful, amazing, you, be yourself

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I love to write,I always have. Writing has always been my escape to my own little world and out of the terrifying one I was living in. I love to write fiction,but with some true stories of my life and.. more..

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