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si :( oh, and sorry it's kinda off topic in the middle...but it was real
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Yep :/
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mmm hmm :)
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yeah :)
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Okay, first thing: It's not about sex...don't go thinking that....sorry if it sucks, thanks if you like it :)
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Yeah, the whole love bug thing in the poem is stupid...but it's the only thing i thought of...i think "whose" may be wrong....not sure.....
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Suckish title, suckish poem, thanks if you like it :)
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actually, in the end, the words "The End" are supposed to rhyme with "Again"...if you didn't catch that. sorry it sucks, sorry for suckish title. than..
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yep, title fail: check. failing poem: check. The word tazing....:check :) the apology for sucking: check. the thanking if you like it: check :)
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ha, yeah...the ending is pretty suckish, but it's the only thing i could think up of. yes, attempted title. and attempt not to be suckish...but failed..
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