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I started this last week. Comments on how to make it better would be appreciated.

An emotion that causes devastation when not controlled.

12-16-10 The first stanza was taken from a poem I wrote a long time ago.

Started 11-21-10 Edited12-1-10

10-8-10

started 9-18-10 Experiment (12-17-10) This is another one I experimented on.

11-25-10 Experiment (12-17-10) I messed around with this poem to try and play with the feel. Tell me what you think.

started 11-10-10 edited 12-17-10 in my opinion this poem is not the greatest. (kinder way of saying, it sucks)

12-1-10

10-24-10