Thanks for the review...you wrote like me when you were younger? You speak like you're ancient and you don't look it lol
Anyway if you started like me, I hope I grow to write like you :D
Thank you for your review. I liked how you pointed out what you liked about the piece. I mix alliteration and rhyme in a great many of my poems and most reviewers discount how difficult this is to do and still maintain logical progression. But it was a favorite trick of the old masters.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Nothing much. Squashing little bugs that try to attack my arm...reading a bit...
Thanks for your comments..your time is much appreciated.....as for A month of Sundays if you are comfortable with archiac language---as though terms were formally used in the early eighteenth century then it will flow for ya---the gist of it is.....she's broken over some promises her lover didn't keep and now trying to drown her sorrows in a pint-getting pretty drunk--she notices she's not alone as it happens to someone else....and resolves to laugh it off.
Put all of your writings into one big post. Copy and paste them together. Be sure to separate them with titles and a couple of spaces in between. I'm actually thinking of doing it, but I'm not quite sure about it yet.
If you're wanting to get a book of yours published, go onto my profile and look at my contests. There's a book publishing contest going on. If that's not what you're wanting, I'm not sure how to get your poetry published. Perhaps you could make a book of poetry. =^.^=
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