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About Me

i am a young woman with hopes and dreams - with dreams of a hope more than what it seems or than what words can portray, because there is more to life than what they say. i am independant and intense like lightening. i light up the storm and damage the world like im intensley fighting. i express myself in the written word. what is a word? a word is what makes my soul flow sky-high like a flock of birds. i write. i write because i have the right to light up the pen and to rock the mic. i have the freedom and the right to write, right?



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Posted 12 Years Ago


love it! keep writing lady. i'll keep reading.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Peace Bam. Thanks for reaching out. I love your bio

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Posted 12 Years Ago


how are you, dear friend?
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Posted 12 Years Ago


no problem about the review its just how i do lol is the link copy and pasted hmm my name on it is More Than Theory

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Posted 12 Years Ago


i did not intend to be rude, but i apologize nonetheless. i just happened to notice that everything you have posted tends to rhyme and i am meely suggested that you try and write something that doesnt ryhme. as far as finding the piece juvenile, i felt you could have used more alternate synonyms to make the piece more interesting. you shouldnt be offended, my critcizim is meant to be constructive...
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Posted 12 Years Ago


THank you for ur review :-)...am glad u could take something from it :-)

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Posted 12 Years Ago


if you wanna review on any works feel free to ask.
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Posted 12 Years Ago


ty for ur review on B***s...am glad it made u laugh!!....i only sent it to the ladies and my buddy here under me!! hehehe

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Posted 12 Years Ago


hola Bam ..... thanks for the request....have fun reading my works...ill enjoy taking the time reading your works soon.