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Hey Joe, I have your review up now. General comment is your writing style is good but the POV shifts were problemmatic. Thanks. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me.

CD,

I think after your review and rereading it myself. I can distiguish and solve my POV issues, which run the same until the end. One more major step understood. :)