Juan Guerrero

Juan Guerrero

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Long Beach, CA
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A Poem by Juan Guerrero
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just a writer of poetry, short stories, news and novels. I've liked writing since i was in junior high school when i realized that i could leave my imagination on paper.


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Posted 16 Years Ago


hi everyone, I was away for a while. thank you for all the great reviews.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Hi, Everyone:

I wish you a happy holidays and best wishes. I want to thank everyone for taking the time to look at my page, any reviews or comments. I am taking a semi-break and will be back in full force in January 2007.

Happy Holidays,
Scott Grant Eckert

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Posted 17 Years Ago


I wouldn't say it's missing something (outside of the single word I pointed out), but it would probably work better in a series of poems or storyline so we can really identify with those little moments. You might want to get a few other people to read it - maybe I'm just so awesome, I drew the line between what you were saying and the beautiful moments they symbolized when everyone else might not. ;)
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