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During the movie, Pat exaggerated his breathing and I tried to copy him. Slowly, my tears stopped falling. My chest burned and everything hurt. "Two p..
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Pat shook behind me with laughter, but he wasn't the only one in the room laughing. "I'd love to see that," he remarked."Oh stick around long enough, ..
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I opened eyes and gasped for air. I held onto my chest and felt my bandaged injuries. It didn't make sense. Wherever I was, it was too dark; there was..
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POV change, backtracking. Some explicit wording
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The sun peeked in through the window, causing a searing, bright, white light behind my eyes. I opened my eyes and glared at the window, daylight poure..
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When I was finished in the bathroom, Pat carried me out into the living room and set me on the right side of the couch again. "You gotta elevate your ..
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"Annette," a voice spoke softly while something stroked my cheek. "Wake up, doll." I blinked my eyes slowly and looked at Pat. He grinned. "Sorry to w..
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"I'm only changing twice," I insisted. Jess pouted and I giggled. "I don't want move my arm too much. It's been a little more painful today," I confes..
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POV change, backtracking, story extension. Some cursing
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*Explict wording - kept to a minimum*
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