Why!?!?!

Why are dad's so stuburn??

I'm just thirteen years old,

Trying to find out,

What life is all about,

I write alot of poems,

Know not all of them are good,

Thats why I ask of you,

To stay away from them,

So dad!

Why are you so mad?

I told you to stay away from that specific journle,

But you didnt listen,

So now you no my mind is twisted,

Why is it so hard to take,

Yeah your little girl,

Made and still makes mistakes,

You yelling and screamning,

Wont change a thing,

It just makes me,

Write more horrible things,

Your a mean but nice man,

Did you know that dad?

You can yell and scream,

And threaten to beat me,

But then after your done yelling,

Your all sweet and kinky,

I dont know about you dad,

So please help me understand,

Why did you read those,

When i told you to stay away,

It's not my fault you went to read them,

So stop getting angry at me!

Author's Note

Well as you can tell my dad went through my journle that held all of my poems... and well he was'nt to happy lets just say I sleep at a friends house cause he kicked someone out of the house.

Reviews

[Jake Donald Stephens]

This kind of thing happened to me as well at your age. Sometimes the generation gap causes big problems. Always keep writing no matter what. He has to let you grow up some time, he has no choice.

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Deep and so sad, Well expressed feelings

[TheFemininePad]

I'm horrified that your father would read your journal when you have asked for privacy. Maybe he was worried about you. Writing is a way of expressing the soul, and allowing an outlet for your frustration. This poem demonstrates this on quite a few levels. Your writing is good except for the grammar, and some misspellings.

[CharlesMonroe]

:/ I'm sorry Sammy. Your dads a duesche. But I love the poem, anger and sadness like seaps out of it. A beautiful way to express something horrible