Try not to get caught...

Try not to get caught...

A Chapter by Samantha Heaton

Samantha! get your a*s out here!, Yes mom?, Where the f**k is my money?, Mom I dont know!, I know you took it!, I did'nt take your money, Yes you did!,(Mom is holding the counter looking like shes about to fall over) Mom are you okay? You seem off balence maybe you wanna sit down, Maybe you wanna shut the f**k up!, Im trying to help you! You took the pills again did'nt you?!, Its none of you business, Mom you do this to yourself everyday! Why?!, (Mom walks up to Sam and grabs her face) Don't talk to me like your father!, Get off me (Sam pushes her mom off of her) So you wanna fight me now?,Why would I want to fight my own mom? especially if shes like this?, Like what Sam?, On pills like you! (Mom gets closer to Sam and spits in her face) Come on wanna fight then fight me!, No, Why all of a sudden dont you wanna hit your own mother?, (Sam raises her voice) I never wanted to hit let alone fight you!, Dont you yell at me
i'm your mother god damn it!, Then act like one!, (Mom steps to Sam and slaps her across the face) Go to your room!, Gladly, With that remark I dont wanna see you for the rest of the night! (Sam keeps her mouth shut walking into her room).-(The song Marry me starts playing) Sam unlocks her phone and spots 5 missed alerts, 1 from Lauren, 1 from Abbi, 1 from her brother Jacob, an from 2 from Zac, She looks at Laurens text first "Dude!" Sam reply's "What haha", Then moves to Abbi's "I have to get up early tomorrow" Sam reply's "Why?, Sam then goes to Jacobs "Tell dad I need to pick up child support tomorrow", Sam reply's "okay", Then Sam looks at the two missed alerts from Zac the first one said "Hey, I love you" the next one said "I'm coming over", Sam reply'd "No Zac you cant mom is on her pills and shes going crazy!" almost instantly he said "Okay, Lets sneek out?", Sam reply'd "ummm? Okay! But I gotta be back by midnight". Zac pulls up in Sams neighbors driveway and then Sam jumps out her window to go to his Camaro. Hey Baby, Hey Zac thanks for getting me outta that house, No problem where do you wanna go? Actrully lets go to McDonalds! Haha how did I know you were gonna say that? Idk but hey let me go grab my money i'll be right back!, Okay hurry, I will (Sam gets out of the Camaro and runs to her window, Jumps through it grabs the box under her bed and is half way out when) Samantha Heaton what the f**k are you doing!! (mom runs to Sams window and grabs Sam by her hair pulling her back inside. (Leaveing Zac watching everyting...)

© 2011 Samantha Heaton

Author's Note

Samantha Heaton
Should I keep going with this??

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You have a great base here to build upon.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Nice intro. I really enjoyed it.

Posted 11 Years Ago

A lot of tension in the introduction. You create a inferno of situations that can blow up. The conversation is direct. Not much kindness in the chapter. I will read the next chapter to see where you are taking me in this story. A excellent introduction.

Posted 11 Years Ago

YES! I really love this! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago

YES! Very interesting and well written; I can't wait to see what happens next!

Posted 11 Years Ago

whoa, that was intense, but i think you should continue, i think everyone wants to know what happens next, i know i do! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

oh dear

Posted 11 Years Ago

Yes keep going, has started so well, With characters that are intersting and mean mom:)

Posted 11 Years Ago

It was really good.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Definitely keep going. But i agree with the others that it was hard to keep up with who was saying what. Keep on penning!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on June 20, 2011
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