I know He's there

A poem about finding out the truth

I Know He’s There 

We are at that place I wished we wouldn’t ever be

when we remain just friends our tie has been cut free

You tell me how we will still talk 

and meet up from time to time

but how many other ex’s have you fed this line

So we part ways and sure enough In contact we do stay

but then it starts being different our friendship it does fray

Messages are few and far between and this does frustrate

after breaking my heart I offer to you my friendship on a plate

How dare you toy with my emotions 

how dare you treat me this way

I’m giving you chance to remain a friend 

I’m owed an explanation and I think its time you pay

The message is replied and the truth soon does arise

“I have hurt you so much so I’m stopping with the lies”

Pain, Anger and Aggression

As I put my fist through the door

How could you string me along

you self-righteous f*****g w***e  

Ruby droplets stain my clothing 

 You crushed all my belief in you

 A lie right from the start

all the times you weren’t with me 

meeting him was your art 

So now I know what’s with the distance 

I laid my heart out bare

now cover it from you 

Because I know he’s there 

Now A choice I must make do I go around?

I’ll let you my readers decide where my feet are bound

Author's Note

This is a participation poem so you decide where I go with this I hope you like the first part please Give honest Reviews

Reviews

[A]

Well I just re read the whole thing, the two parts I mean, it's a very good piece.. very powerful and very emotional ... the images are easily visualized so we could live with your throw the whole poem.. You did a great job Ashley

[TPK Stories]

I loved where you took this poem and can't wait for more.

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

Please all read he's there and I'm coming for the conclusion to this poem

[Margaret Marie Hubbard]

I think you answered the question with the line, "you self-righteous f*****g w***e" It's quite a lovely day for a stroll don't you think?

[Labtoad]

wow, this actually knocked the wind out of me. The emotion was conveyed VERY well. This sounds too raw for a storybook ending, in my opinion...life can be harsh. What will you do when "he" leaves "her"?

[northern monkey]

Once again, you've nailed that emotion! So many of us have shared this experience, but it takes special talent to voice it for us all. Knowing smiles on all your readers?

[Dilan Gray]

I really love this poem. I love the story in is, its sad but fantastic.

[Deactivated_BurningDemo..]

This is awesome. (:
Wouldn't recommend punching a door that hard for real though.... might hurt.

[poems with feeling]

nice ;)

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

I really like it.. i mean the way you worded it makes it sound perfect. I love it actually :p