What Colorful Lives

What Colorful Lives

A Poem by Rachael
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Thi poem makes me feel all fuzzy inside! Gah!

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What Colorful Lives

 

She told me write in color

Let a rainbow spill on each page

My emotions in all different hues

Each referring to a different phase

My notebook soon became drenched in hues

Though red and yellow were foreseen at the end

My beginning filled with those of blacks and blues

Memories in need of a helping hand

© 2013 Rachael


Author's Note

Rachael
I personally love this poem, out of all the poems I've wrote this is definetly my favorite! I hope its the same for you :)

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Ah, yes. I also love colors. I associate them with my mood each day.

When I am happy then I would choose yellow
When I am sad, it could be black or deep blue
When I am angry, let me choose red
When I feel jealous, see me in green.

Nicely penned, Rachael. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


and maybe you found, as most poets do...the blues were easier to write...and that color dominated...usually does for me...even though i am quite the contented and most often happy person....it is easier to write "blue"--

very nice piece here.

jacob

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rachael

7 Years Ago

So true, the sadness in life is so much easier to portray because we know exactly what we feel insid.. read more
Awesome work.
Impressed by your colorful presentation of 'rainbow'.
This is amazing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not too be too much of a scumbag, but you need to do a wee bit more grammar. I enjoyed the over all feeling and emotion, but i think you have more in your own power than you know. Liked this Stolie and OJ on me.



cheers.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the colors involved and how u show the emotion coming from the colors within themselves separately. Nice job :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

and what a beautiful canvas it makes :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rachael

7 Years Ago

Indeed. ;)
I love all colors! And the rainbow in your poem was adorable!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked this. Great read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rachael

7 Years Ago

Thanks! :)
I enjoyed your words...there is a contest about colors you might want to enter under the contest section...SyberRose

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 4, 2013
Last Updated on April 4, 2013
Tags: Rainbow Happy Ending Love Sadnes

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Rachael
Rachael

Somewhere, CO



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