special one

dont take them for granted

comfortable
to do or say anything
when am with you
hurt you bad
you hurt me too
but we still together
you know me
like a leopard knows the spots on its skin
you give me support
like a pillar to a building
i can count on you
like you are my guardian angel
i hope you know i love you
you are my best friend
my best friend forever

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

simply stated ... i like your advice on taking for granted .. so very true .. your poetry seems very personal .. confessional if you will ..so far for me it works :)
E.
ps i hope you read this to your beloved ;)

[3X3MPLER]

i havent. i dont know if they will like my poems

[Einstein Noodle]

i hear you man! perhaps you will know if and when the timing is right ;)

[Blu]

This a nice romantic poem. I like the symbiotic feel in the descriptions for the relationship. I like the imagery and the "life" it gives to the poem. Until I read more, this is my favorite. Keep it going.

[Strawberry Evil]

So pretty! I really like the metaphors and the mood, good job~

[Kimberly Navarro]

awwww. so sweet and beautiful I hope that you told her this and she knows it! real life poetry

[Celie Rose]

Really nice poem. Short but to the point. Good theme and expression. Well written.

[B. Boileau]

Those special ones are indeed hard to come by. This verse speaks volumes of that. We'll done and thank you for the well penned thoughts

[3X3MPLER]

i appreciate your feedback

[alifeacoustic]

We sometimes forget how special that special one is in our lives and how we would miss them if they were not part of it. We should take more time to enjoy their company, be with them and make sure they know how special they are. Beautiful sentiment here 3X3MPLER

[3X3MPLER]

thank you very much my friend

[alifeacoustic]

You're very welcome.