Be Strong, Believe

Be Strong, Believe

A Poem by TheMizFit

just a poem I wrote earlier... in an attempt to fight back my depression, but I failed badly.

In a room full of people, you feel so alone.
You realize, you're not at home.
Are these your friends?
Why don't they care?
A desperate call,
A desperate plead,
Someone help me,
I'm in need.

Keep your spirits alive.
Someone cares, someone listens.
Hold on, you can survive
Believe it, it gets better.

No one cares
I scream words no one hears
What's a reason to stay?
When I could close my eyes and lay

You could get through this
Just believe more and doubt less
Stay awake 'cause I believe
But before someone else, you do it.
First, believe in yourself.

I'm a nobody here
That no one could hear
But if I believe in myself,
And pursue my dreams,
Will I be who I want to be?

© 2011 TheMizFit

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differently constructed, but however i did enjoy the powerful read

Posted 11 Years Ago

My Goodness I really like this write,
powerful and wonderful

Posted 11 Years Ago

"Stay awake 'cause I believe
But before someone else, you do it.
First, believe in yourself."

I love these lines. They remind me of how people may tell they believe in you--that you can overcome depression, and that you deserve to live and be who you want-- but in the end it's your decision, and you must overcome it and believe in yourself to do it.

I really like this, how it's like two sides warring together, which is what happens in depression. There's a side of you that believes it can get better, but another side of you that can't at all. I like how in this poem, it shows that. And in the end it's an ultimate question of will you be able to overcome it and become the person you were made to be?

great :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

Really strong poem. There's a lot of feeling in it. The format is AMAZING. It makes it seem like you're discussing with yourself.

Posted 11 Years Ago

i like the way you constructed this to look like a conversation, very clever.
this is an excellent and poignant write, well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago

I love the construction and format of this makes for some interesting reading. I love the conversation between yourself, because it is an excellent example of what people go through with depression! Powerful write!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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I really like this one. You are a very talenetd writer.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on May 12, 2011
Last Updated on May 12, 2011
Tags: depression, believe, stay strong, comfort, sadness, pain




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