Just You

Just You

A Poem by TheMizFit

Someone to lean on,
      someone like you.
Someone who cares,
I think I need someone,
     Someone like you.

You make me happy,
Seeing you smile,
it melts my heart
It makes me smile.

You make me sad,
When you're not there
No shoulder to cry on,
All alone on a corner.

You confuse me,
I don't know what I feel.
I need you right here
Beside me, nowhere else.

Do you feel the same way?
..because I think I'm in love with you.
I need you; not someone like you
     Just you

© 2011 TheMizFit

Author's Note

I'm not quite pleased with this.
Weird how I wrote this while watching Christian's match with Sheamus (WWE)


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methinks thou hast fallen for someone in a very hard way, beautifully done!
i love love, reading it just makes me love it all the more, and you have captured her essence herein exquisitely...

Posted 12 Years Ago

awww incredibly touching and romantic

Posted 12 Years Ago

that was actually very nice!! You had one mistake. On a corner, change that to in the corner.I think it would sound a little better than on. But anyway, this poem was excellent! I love how it seemed like you rhymed! Great job. I love rhyming poems. It shows that you have skill and you can seem to put words however you'd like!

Posted 12 Years Ago

I like this it reflects to me as someone confused about love and how to feel. I think you did a wonderful write here. Nice job!

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on June 17, 2011
Last Updated on June 17, 2011




About Me? I'm Rica. Currently 13 years old and I live in the Philippines. I am currently a Junior in High School in one of the best schools in the country :). I love music and I always wanted to be a.. more..


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