Early and Late

just how I was feeling at this time in November

Early November

Twelve days in

Sleet on the road

Light snow on the cars

Gray clouds of dulled delight

Sprinkle spitting rain

Soulless parking lot

Cold chill of desperation surrounds everything

Howl old ancient wind

Early November

Bad juju

Reviews

[Ceri]

Interesting move from mundane to magical here. You've captured November exactly, at least in the way that I experience it. November always seems to me like a car that won't start. Then again, that same feeling can be felt all year round in my home town- if it weren't so damned Welsh, there'd be tumbleweeds rolling through. I'm always waiting for the magic to happen, even the "bad juju".
I'm a big fan of keeping poems short and to the point, and you didn't waste a word here. Very well put together, apt imagery, spot on!

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

Thank you very much for your kind words

[Anne Timmins]

deep thoughts and feelings portrayed..good job on this lovely piece

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

Thank you very much I'm glad you enjoyed this piece