My Friend You're Not forgotten

Sometimes the shortest friendships are remembered for a lifetime. Thankyou google for the picture

As I left the store,

I looked up to see your face,

A moment passed and we both smiled.

 

Left longing for your company,

The times we shared,

I remember fetching that coat you wear.

 

The fun we had was simple bliss,

Not a place we couldn’t make to laugh,

Like a sister you are to me.

 

The years are many having you as my friend,

Such wonderful company,

But alas it has not last.

 

Maybe we are from such separate worlds,

Or maybe too much the same,

A few small words were said.

 

I’m not sure if time can fix,

The words we spoke, and what we’ve lost,

And oh what we’ve lost.

 

But I will still love you like my sister

And

Life won’t ever be the same.

So I hope that we shall meet again.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Monster ^.^]

It's a great friend story :) but i'm sorry but I really, really get annoyed with simple grammar problems... so if you wouldn't mind, can I correct it for you? I'm not saying I'm a master and all but the basics are pretty much obvious... so if you don't mind?

And don't get me wrong, I loove the story so that's why I want to get some words right?

[AWickedMoon]

Ha-ha it’s no problem! I am truly horrible with spelling also. You should see my poems before I edit them the first time! ;)

[Monster ^.^]

This has a limited space, sorry... hmm

[L. Catherine]

Great story on friendship. I've had a couple friendships like these and even one or two actually worked out and now we're good friends again. Great job!

[AWickedMoon]

Thats great to hear! Thank you. :)

[L. Catherine]

Welcome! :)

[spiritwind]

You awakened a pain there
but I grew a pretty effective scab over it
I wish people would treasure their friends
treat them like million-dollar delicate vases
prone to shatter into irreplaceable ruins
if mistreated and abused.
great job
respect your heart
you might want to read for grammar mistakes before posting

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you! Would you mind pointing out the grammer mistakes?

[Norma M Sutton]

I like it.

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you!

[Harley Rose]

This is beautiful... no grammar mistakes that I can see... The first sentence really draws the reader in... Love it!

[AWickedMoon]

Thankyou! :)

[Admiral Kirk]

That's very sweet and touching... It really sucks to lose a friend... Great job. (:

[AWickedMoon]

It does but I can hope will meet agian. :)

[Admiral Kirk]

It's great to keep your hopes up. :)

[Calibaster]

The only things I can find wrong are the title, where you used the wrong your(it should have been you're) and the line where it say's,"But alas it has not last," did you mean, did not last? or maybe has not lasted? Other than that, it was amazing! I loved every bit of it! great job!:)

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you! :)

[Calibaster]

your welcome!

[KAOlmsted]

Thanks for sharing this with us.

[Lucien Maier]

great piece. the longing again comes through wonderfully. good write.

[AWickedMoon]

I'm glad the longing shows, and thankyou for the wonderful comments!

[Tex]

I loved it. very strong write.

[AWickedMoon]

Thank-you.