A Love like Morning

A Love like Morning

A Poem by Phantom Heart

 

The Morning
 
When the sun comes up
The sky greets it with vibrant hues
It warms the moon chilled air
Leaving it crisp and clean
The morning dew is quickly dried
The birds begin their song
Welcoming the new day
 
My Love
 
When a smile rises
From the corners of her mouth
She warms the sorrow laden soul
Leaving it whole and new
Tears are gently wiped away
She helped a mute boy sing
And welcome a new life

© 2009 Phantom Heart


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dazzlingly brilliant :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


This was so very beautiful. In a word, elegant.

Thank you for this piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow. that was very beautiful and the emotion was very powerful. i loved the line;
"she helped a mute boy sing" it was just wonderful
overall a fantastic write

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow...i love this poem...great imagery
Great Job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Woah.

This is a really beautiful poem.
It took my breath away. It's so well written and the way you correlated the morning and your love was awsome.

It reminds me of the poem 'Nothing Gold Can Stay' by Jack Frost, except this poem is about love rather than age.

Nevertheless, it's extremley well written.

XxStaySweet,
Rina

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Phantom Heart
Phantom Heart

Coal City, IL



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