A Love like Morning

A Love like Morning

A Poem by Phantom Heart


The Morning
When the sun comes up
The sky greets it with vibrant hues
It warms the moon chilled air
Leaving it crisp and clean
The morning dew is quickly dried
The birds begin their song
Welcoming the new day
My Love
When a smile rises
From the corners of her mouth
She warms the sorrow laden soul
Leaving it whole and new
Tears are gently wiped away
She helped a mute boy sing
And welcome a new life

© 2009 Phantom Heart

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dazzlingly brilliant :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

This was so very beautiful. In a word, elegant.

Thank you for this piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago

wow. that was very beautiful and the emotion was very powerful. i loved the line;
"she helped a mute boy sing" it was just wonderful
overall a fantastic write

Posted 14 Years Ago

Wow...i love this poem...great imagery
Great Job :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a really beautiful poem.
It took my breath away. It's so well written and the way you correlated the morning and your love was awsome.

It reminds me of the poem 'Nothing Gold Can Stay' by Jack Frost, except this poem is about love rather than age.

Nevertheless, it's extremley well written.


Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on May 15, 2009


Phantom Heart
Phantom Heart

Coal City, IL

I really would like to become a better writer in order to express myself clearly. I am looking for lots of constructive criticism. I haven�t had anyone teach me how to write, so I have jus.. more..


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