In A Room Of Seven

This was written while I was at Heathers apt. (shes my small groupe leader at church) for a bible study... I just wasnt having a good night at all... :( Sorry every one!!

In a room of seven girls

I lay here all alone

Why dont I fit in any more?

We used to be so close!

Besties!!

But now...

We barely know eachother...

I'm so alone

If it wasnt for my sniffleing,

Caused by the tears,

That I'm trying to ceep in my eyes,

I would be perfectly siclent!
Fighting with the tears,

I continue to lay alone

Alone is who I've become

Alone is who I am

Alone is my biggst fear

Alone today

Alone I stay

Reviews

[A. Amos]

Wonderful piece of writing and I'm sure many will relate to your work

[Nithin Purple]

nice experience,,,ha ha nicely writ

[just is]

I could feel the emptiness in this write.
This is a very well written write.
Like how you express yourself.

[paradise]

Hmmm I like it

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard when people become apart. I like how you wrote the poem. I could feel the sadness in the words. Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote