Boiling Pain 7/20/11

this one is about my mom... "/

7/20/11

You said

You'd rather be dead,

All you'd need is gun powder and lead

Horrible thoughts race through my head

 

Your words on replay

What am I suposed to say?

Asking my friends to pray

Wishing I'd never met this day

 

Mixed emotions bouling inside

Wanting to run and hide

All night I cryed

Left with absolutely no pride

 

I'm in so much pain

I'm going insane

Stareing at that large, bulging vane

Wondering if I should cut down the lane

 

Why me?

Why do I feel guilty?

Why can't you see,

The pain dripping out of me?

 

Open your eyes!!

Its time you realise

This smile is just a disguise

To hide all of YOUR lies!

 

Reviews

[just is]

You said
You'd rather be dead,
All you'd need is gun powder and lead
Horrible thoughts race through my head

Love the descriptions in this stanza, I could see the imagery.
I loved the last stanza, it's strong and to the point.
Love this write, very poetic and to the point.
Awesome writing here!

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we need the truth like in the ending of this poem. Can't live hiding pain and weakness. One day will appear and take down the fake walls. I like the honest and direct words of this poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote