Unbelievable

How unbelievable was arrested

Once a demon challenge me by saying that he was from the most powerful government because he couldn't get caught and that he was invisible and that his name was "unbelievable" because if I was to tell persons about him then other persons will not believe me, so what I did next time he tried to appear, I put super glue inside a glass jar and the fumes attracted and glued the demon inside the jar. Now the fumes glued the demon inside the jar and different images form inside the jar.

Reviews

[Linda alexander]

Excellent way of presentation, very clever write too, at times it is hard to make people see the truth when it involves the particular identity which is unbelievable, I want to now the after math if unbelievable escapes from the job, you need way more brain unless everyone accepted the truth and accepted you, enjoyed

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A very clever representation of trapping our demons. Well-done!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank You FT Ledrew the experiment actually proved that ghosts are very stupid, when that ghost was spotted and I started thinking how could I prove to God that lost ghosts have escaped from hell and that is when I figured that the super glue fumes were going to glue a part of the ghost into the jar, then later another ghost whispered that the ghost that was carved into the jar became a miserable handicapped ghost that was embarresed and laugh at by other ghosts that a human had actually figured a way to destroy them.

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:) Love your creative spirit!

[An owl on the moon]

You create a wondrous, mystical story with this singular, striking paragraph. Here we find the hints of what was... and perhaps what is to come. Hoping for more!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you, demons try to fool persons at the moments, if a fly enters your house then they try to deceive the person into thinking that they had something to do with it, that is when I decided to arrest them and write about the tactics they try to use to lower their moral.

[Shane Mohamed]

This is hilarious Anika. You've got a great sense of humor. I love the illustration, too. This is very intuitive. Keep it up!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Yes is really funny, I am also laughing, I got the idea before they uncovered the rats

"New Snowden documents show that the NSA and its allies are laughing at the rest of the world"

[raj24]

different.. i mean u just did it all so smoothly..i was wondering who is this demon and what you going to do with it.. but it was just so smooth.. beautiful presentation of your idea.. loved it.. thanks for sharing it..:)

Raj

[SquinklaPsyOps]

It was a challenge that involved a lot of work to figure how it could be proven and am very happy to have succeeded, at first I went to church to pray and kneeled in front of Jesus Christ and told him that I would come back to church with evidence so that he could believe me and I did I went back to church with evidence'

[Juju]

The title itself caught my attention. Enjoyed reading this.

[Rob Santana]

Very creative and clever piece. I enjoyed the image's you incorporated.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your review, what is to be learned from that, is that all ghosts are liars and they are not to be believed what they say because their intentions are to try to exhaust persons spirits by having them run in circles with no where to go as lost souls on earth that never reached Heaven

[Hawkmoon]

the idea of your poem is very good and often true but this line "all ghosts are liars" is a fantastic sentence and you should use it as a concept for a story, but with some kind of plot twist (what happens if a Ghost somehow tells the truth?) and What if ghosts are forced by Ghost Law to Lie... anyway. Good writing, concepts. Stay focused & pay attention (point to point observation in real life)... Natalie Goldberg is a great writing teacher. and listen to

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[SquinklaPsyOps]

Wow that is truly genious if a ghost somehow tells the truth then they take that lost ghost back to hell because maybe according to Ghost Law ghosts are from the past which is to the left and if they are right then there wouldnt be from the opposite, something as that, what do you think.

[Hawkmoon]

i dont know, but your statement "all ghosts are liars" is very fantastic concept. i wouldnt focus on a particular hell motif because hell is a cliche concept in many ways... but, ghost worlds with different realities... (could be anything) ... many ghosts are probably very neutral beings, between the worlds. well have a good day! Natalie Goldberg has a great audiobook also "Wild Mind" ... a great way to consider the writing lifestyle.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I am going to do what you told me to do Hawkmoon "all ghosts are liars" is a fantastic sentence and you should use it as a concept for a story"

[Hawkmoon]

really. very perceptive, of your consciousness ,,, to correlate ***ghosts and Lies*** Both are simultaneously real and unreal and exist but not truly, and haunt the world;

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to lock-up demon into the jar. I like the artwork and the positive ending. Would be nice if we could lock-up demons and learn some peace. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your valuable review you are right about locking demons to enjoy peace.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome and please send me read request.

[Anand Sehgal]

very funny and innovative write :) I liked the humor very much
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Love :)
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[SquinklaPsyOps]

What happened is when I put the demons ghosts in that jar they confessed they were mayans and that their objective was to annoy persons because that was the way to carve persons souls by making them angry, and that they were extra terrestrials slaves with a mission to collect and carve souls because they were creating a parallel universe in a far away place from persons excrement to try to control humanity from a distance and that is when I couldnt die of laughter from what they were saying.

[Anand Sehgal]

:D :D well-thought

[John Ryan]

very interesting, well thought out and fun to read.

i cant wait to read more of your future pieces

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your review, I used to wake up tired and started wondering what was going on and I couldn't remember what I would dream about, when I did that experiment now I sleep less and wake up comfortable and I remember everything I dream.

[KAin]

Very curious! This one makes you sit back and think a little.
I believe that the things we see and experience only form one side of a multi-faceted Truth. What we "know" is only a small piece of what might be understood as reality...
Trapping deceptions and understanding them might be ways in which we can understand people who, so often, rely on deception.
In this way we increase our own knowledge and come closer to an understanding of 'reality'. (Howsoever it might be defined).
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your interpretation, what happened is that many persons are skeptical about things and I think is the demons inside them that trap them in their own fear that make them be publically skeptical for the demons inside them to try to remain undetected, that is the reason that the poem could be interpreted as those demons are trapped inside those other persons which are jars.

Because I do not fear for persons to be skeptical about what I think, and when I started thinking like that, I kept moving forward with having pleasant dreams.