Ash Wednesday

Original Religious Poetry

Dear Father God

Rub your ashes on my forehead in a sign of a cross

To remind me of your Son Jesus Christ

As I repent of all the sins I have commited

I continue this period of spiritual discipline

Clean my thoughts and make me an Arch Angel

Where I promise to always push to hell all demons and lost ghosts

In the Name Of Your Son Jesus Christ and The Holy Spirit

I kneel in front of You and Your Son

Amen

Author's Note

Artist Of The Kneeling Angel Drawing: Gianlorenzo Bernini (1598 - 1680)

Reviews

[Kamari's]

A religious poem very unique I must say. It is very well wrote you manage to capture what humanity should pray for . I admire you for most writers might not post a religious piece as this which tells me you are brave . This poem is a lot in a few words as a message to the rest of us perhaps do the same and for someone so young ready to take this vow you write of is a true testament not only to your writing but you as a person I hope you get what you ask for dear one and keep writing dear for people need to see this type of writing in this day and age.

[J. K. Beach]

Lovely prayer on this day of spiritual renewal... the words remind me in a vague and lovely way of "The Lords Prayer." Well done!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank You J. K. Beach for your valuable review and interpretation will be happy to read more of your writings, See you soon.

[Jamestown]

This is awesome!!!!!!! I love this write!!!!! PTL. ....
ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO CHRIST JESUS!!!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank You for your valuable review Jamestown am glad you liked it and your blessing will be reading more of your writings.

[~]

Good prayer. It is but rightful to kneel before God.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank You for your interpretation and I really appreciate your rightful guidance.

[Mary Bradley]

Beautiful prayer kind of poem ... nice flow in it too . Good piece !

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you Mary Bradley for your valuable interpretation and really appreciate your review.

[Eliza K.]

this is a beautiful prayer. simple and still meaningful.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank You for your valuable interpretation Miss Eliza K and am happy that you liked the prayer.

[Shittu Temitayo A.]

Its nice, simple and easy to understand. Keep it up, but you can still do far better than this, its in you.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your valuable interpretation and encouragement.

[lydie]

This poem is really simple but it really prompts you to start thinking about the poem and other things related to it.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your valuable interpretation and your description "it really prompts you to start thinking about the poem and other things related to it"

[child of God]

Very beautiful. Prayer a pleasure. To read thank you for sharing

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank You for your valuable interpretation and compliment.

[Kimberly Miller]

Lovely! Its simple, yet very deep and thought-provoking.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank You for your valuable interpretation Miss Kimberly

[Emily]

Lovely poem for Ash Wednesday!
Keep it up!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank You for your valuable interpretation Miss Emily.