It was a little confusing to tell if the narrator was the person trapped in that 'hospital/mental-ward' or the father. There were a few typos, 3 that I remember, so you might want to read over it again. Over all the poem tells a very powerful story, and you gave us many good images that brought the story behind this poem to life. Well done.
It was actually my brother.. but i can see how it could be confusing.. i never redo or gover my work once its dont so thats probabbly why i never caught that.. thank you.
It was a little confusing to tell if the narrator was the person trapped in that 'hospital/mental-ward' or the father. There were a few typos, 3 that I remember, so you might want to read over it again. Over all the poem tells a very powerful story, and you gave us many good images that brought the story behind this poem to life. Well done.
Not much to say. I love writing i am more of a morbid dark writer then anything else. I sing and dance and love to read i love music and i love photography as well.. more..