Excitation (10 Word Poem)

Excitation (10 Word Poem)

Excitation
Moving
From one phase
Moving higher
Transforming 
Your heart

Reviews

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank Nyla. I am glad that you were able to understand the deeper meaning behind the poem. I really enjoy the depth and strength of your poetry as well

[nyla bass]

I like this very much, Ahmad. For me... this is about creativity (excitation), expansion (transformation), and fulfillment through [it].

[Ahmad Cox]

Thus is the point. I wanted it to encompass a lot layers and mean different things all in one poem.

[UnendingOceans]

I enjoy the brevity and the experimental tinge it brings to the piece, but I feel this could use something concrete as a point of focus so that it's not too abstract. What are you excited about? What phases is this feeling moving, and moving you, from? How is it transforming your heart? What are the effects of this transformation? Do you feel better for it?

Hope this is helpful,

UnendingOceans