Altogether

Altogether

A Poem by Ahmad Cox

Altogether

Altogether beautiful
Altogether wonderful
Altogether lovely
Is your soul
I feel the beauty
Inside of you
I feel the love
The kindness
The light
Flowing through you
I feel you inside of me
I know you are there
Living inside of me
Your heart is in my hands
I know our hearts are one
They are intertwined
Regardless
Of how far it is
Regardless
Of how long it is
I can feel your heart
Beating next to mine
Slowly deepening
As we take in each other
Consuming each other
With our love

Not about any one in particular. This just came out. Let me know what you guys think.
       

© 2012 Ahmad Cox


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A lovely piece. I found it comforting, peaceful and beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I am single at the moment but who knows. I might just find someone to read it to

Posted 11 Years Ago


Your woman would love it. Dedicate it to her.

Posted 11 Years Ago


i liked it

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on August 30, 2012
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Ahmad Cox
Ahmad Cox

San Jose, CA



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