Feather

Feather

Floating on a breeze
Floating in my dreams
Suspended like a feather
Blowing on the winds 
Of my mind
Blowing wherever it pleases
Flying along
Rising and ascending
Falling and descending
Only to rest on the earth
Once again

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

Very nice piece!

[Junert]

Once again a good job done.

[afra]

beautiful ...i love it ...well done

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I really appreciate your positive comments. I wasn't sure what people would think when I posted it.

[....]

What a really amazing write, awesome

[Amanda]

I really like this, great job. keep writing :)

[Steven Cash]

Reminds me of a scene from Inception