#EVERYDAY IS A FIGHT !!

#EVERYDAY IS A FIGHT !!

A Poem by anonymous_at

To come in this life is easy,
but to live; is hard
every single day.......
you have to fight to survive.....

You have to fight
all your insecurities and fear of failure ;
so that, you don't fall into dark pit.......

You have to loose yourself
and become submissive;
so that, you have have people around you.....

You have to be either the most pretty girl
or the girl with the brains;
so that, people regard your opinion......

You have to be the most social girl 
or the part of the most dominating social group;
so that, you don't  feel left out......

You have to fight back your tears
and leave your past behind;
so that, people don't rule over you.....

Everyday is a fight.....so that  you can wake up every morning ,
hoping that today will be better ......
but it's your either karma or fate, that you end up having same tortuous day or worse than yesterday.......

© 2017 anonymous_at


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Everyday is a fight, but we keep going! Keep fighting and keep writing!

Love,
lostinthewaves

Posted 6 Years Ago


anonymous_at

6 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for taking out your time to review my poem.... Hope you keep visiting..... :)
Normally I don't like to read something this gloomy when there's not a shred of hope anywhere. The one thing that saves your message, so it doesn't feel too oppressive, is that it's clearly stated with stunning honesty. Many times a depressive rant like this can feel like the narrator is describing the dark demons in one's head. But in your message, you reflect back to us the things you see in life, the very real crap that goes on, which beats one down & down & down. It's not a message I like to hear, becuz I wish it were different for many young people . . . but this is what it is & you've painted a vivid portrait of how it can be. Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


anonymous_at

6 Years Ago

Thanks for your review..... But honestly i do try every time to write new version of every poem i wr.. read more
Well..ur every writing leaves me speech less..I am actually so surprised and happy to see u grow with every blog u publish..It's as if u r turning into a whole new personality or maybe it's the true side of u which is now coming out through ur writing..Really a beautiful poem..I am truly touched

Posted 6 Years Ago


anonymous_at

6 Years Ago

Coz there can never be a day....when someone doesn't want their mother to be happy..... I luv u to .. read more
Thedreamer16

6 Years Ago

Thnku sweetheart...It means alot to me
anonymous_at

6 Years Ago

Oka mums.....:) have a nice evening.....
Hope everyone likes it.... This poem is one of my favorites coz Everyday when i use to leave my house for school.... I use to recite it.... As a ritual..... Coz that's what always happened with me.... But whatever let's leave that and try to enjoy this poem.... Positive and constructive reviews are welcome.... Please try to ignore my grammatical errors.... :)

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on November 15, 2017
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