Obvious Yet Overlooked-By: Akeen V.

Unstoppable tomorrow arrives as today leaves.

Glorious sunshine rises as grayish light disperses.

Stars quietly flicker out, similar to candles caught in a breeze.

 

Seconds pass casually without recognition like a passing fly.

Time’s notion quickly falls irrelevant as soon as it begins.

 

Sins turns into normalness once they have been committed,

Intuiting many regret filled tears when sinners cry.

 

While in today’s devalued principles and greed filled eyes

Nothing amounts to nothing, which is implausible,

Everything is something despite its lack of importance.

 

Nothing can ever equal nothing, for nothing does not exist.

Yet our egotistical human race persists to dismiss

That all living or nonliving things are reliable

And solely accountable for the survival of our comforted

Society, where meaningful actions, transformations

Alongside earth's continuation is easily dispersed and thwarted.

 

Therefore ambitious materialism, grows ever more distorted,

Ensuring money will always be upheld to godly proportions.

Creating a massive absence for noticing earth and life’s

Most beautiful nothings that strive to halt grief’s

Worrisome hands from interacting with the devils keys

Which could unlock dooms catastrophic doors, with simple ease.

Reviews

[J.]

I really like this. Very well expressed, with great protest. Sadly true, we as human and The People of our various countries, are stuck amidst the muck and slime our leaders throw at us. And yet, we still seem to forget what is actually really important-taking things for granted, all that is in it's simplest form. Great work Akeen! And welcome to WC!

[Meredithe]

This is a beautiful piece, and you finished it wonderfully. good job! :)

[r]

I love this, especially the ending. It's just....idk. Something about it just catches my eye. The subject and the way it flows is awesome. I really like it.

[Norma M Sutton]

I like this. The last stanza says it all. Great work.

[brianna vega]

loves it.

[Im a reel vamp lover]

i love it. it is deep and throughtful i could never come up with that.

[just rose.]

I like the complexity of this. It sort of reads like proverbs.

[Kelley]

You poem had good sentence structure and all the spelling was correct. Overall I would say this was a great poem.

[Wondering Mind]

harsh truths penned with excellent phrasing