rhythm

I'm always one to say goodbye,

to things looking me right in the eye.

I can't seem to think straight, when

people come and judge my gait.

Always caring what people think, 

never stopping to wonder

Why do I even care?

I'm my own person, and that is that.

I shouldn't care what they declare,

about the person I should be,

compared to the one I am currently.

I'm sorry if I'm wrong to you,

but it's my life,

and I'll do what I do.

I can't seem to get it right,

when others fall into the rhythm so easily.

It's like I'm all alone in the world,

my once called friends, now my foes.

~Akinli Wilde

Reviews

[The Iron Horseman]

Nicely done. Don't worry, it all comes right in the end!
One point - I believe you meant the line 'It's like I'm all along in the world,' to be 'It's like I'm all alone in the world,".
Keep on writing!

[Akinli Wilde]

Thanks! I fixed it. :)

[The Iron Horseman]

You're welcome!