You made me

one person can become your world

You cry

I cry

You happy

I happy

Your lips, my biggest weakness

Your Smile, my biggest distraction

If you need me 

I'll come running

from million miles away

Just to see you one last time

One last feeling closer to you

I won't ever hesitate to give you more

If you need something let me know

I will do everything to make you happy

to bring a smile, a sweet smile

You cry

I cry

You happy

I happy

You made me spin on my feet

You made me feel heaven in hell

You made me believe that i can live happily

You made me a person that i never was...

You are everything i had

Your one touch can do miracle

Your one effort can solve hardest problem

Without you i am nothing...

You cry

I cry

You happy

I happy

Author's Note

i write that i feel like doing it..
you decide that you like it or not...

Reviews

[Megan]

I like how the people in this poem seem to be connected, intertwined. and how the repetition of the words "you cry i cry" and "you happy i happy" seem to strengthen that. it makes me get the feeling that these people were in love in an interconnected way, and they are a part of each other, a love that can't be broken. i love the feeling this poem brings. togetherness.

[Rose Masen]

This was so romantic! It's full of sweetness and adoration. I loved it!

[trainwreck]

Awesome poem, especially for valentine's day. The entirety of the art was amazing. You proved again that colors and fonts do matter.

[Marie Harrison]

Very sweet poem. I love the playful colors too. Charming poem!

[Ashley Myers]

the perfect v day poem

powerful

[hannajade]

Cute poem:)
a suggestion--
when you have the,
'You cry
I cry

You happy
I happy'
It might be better like this:
Your crying,
I'm crying.

Your smiling,
I'm smiling.'
just an idea...:D

[Jeff]

Great work! Very sad and emotional.

[TheFemininePad]

Powerful and emotional. This poem is definitely a great poem. It can be very painful to read this poem, for those of us who don't have someone to love. The structure of this poem is very good, and it flows so beautifully. I can tell that you invested a lot of time into this writing. Happy Valentine's Day!

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Sweet from the heart, sugar and candy! Love it~

[Emilee Grimm]

an amazing way to let the person you are head-over-heels in love with that you can't live without them....simply beautiful!