my rain

transfixed by the rain

that lashes down around me

drowning memories

lightning flashes far away

...............................

transformed by the rain´s

enchanting patterns

gentle splish-splash rhythm motion

heavy over flow

...................

my rain falls steady

soaks me blissful

drenching clothes and seeping

cold beneath my skin

.........................

can´t you feel the rain reach over to me

clouds gorgeous cover

over constant seas

of pounding wave and sparkle change

.............................................

now i watch the death mask

rain washes all the rest away

ninety-nine day fever growing

see can you walk away

Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

I honestly am in total agreement with 'dontwakeme'- how is beautifully penned poetic wonder such as this only have a few reviews. I must send this all over the place to be read!

Beautifully emotional piece. Nicely done.

[dontwakeme]

This is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read, WC and all included. I don't understand how this piece only has two reviews when you so clearly poured your heart out. Your a true master of the power of words.

[Shelly Braen]

Beautiful. The rain is such a powerful and blessed element of nature, and you do it justice within this piece. Good flow, wonderful write.