Estrella, Estrella

Estrella, Estrella

A Poem by Aleyah
"

I didn't write this...

"

Your silence,

it's killing me, but 

I'm 

still

Breathing

You in like a drug, now 

 I'm dazed and

You just can't turn back 

right 

now.

 

Leaving

paths for a fool’s heart and

I’m crushed

like a glass under concrete

It’s too much

Don’t leave me here 

aching 

like 

this.

 

Falling

(...You’re not for me) but I’m

Waiting

Caressing your presence just

Caving

Into something I thought was 

Unsafe


You're my comfort in times like this.

 

Crazy

I can’t catch you now but I’m

     Chasing

Everything you are 

.....Please understand

What you are here

The clock’s spinning faster and

It’s not fair


Because I try and I try but I 


Can’t take my eyes off of you.

© 2011 Aleyah


Author's Note

Aleyah
My subconscious did.

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woooooooow.... I love the way u make use of the italics, bold, spaces and everything. How the words feels like come out of the heart but still is reluctant to be said. I love it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Strong basement and strong will before the love, nice poem.....

Posted 8 Years Ago


i like the font changes. very emotive.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love the structure of this. It has a great flow and a deep message. Great write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like the structure of this. It captures a love/hate relationship perfectly.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very clever and deep write. I really enjoyed it..xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your subconscious is talented. :D Well penned.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this. Beautiful write. Absolutely amazing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this and the Author's note is perfect.. :)xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful as usual!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 31, 2011
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Tags: hey it's another poem!, breathing, leaving, falling, unsafe, crazy, please

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Aleyah
Aleyah

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