Cheesy Love Poem

Cheesy Love Poem

A Poem by Alli-o
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This...is a real cheesy poem...about love, I guess

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I feel your heart, I feel your breath
Forever by your side I'll rest

You hold me close, gentle yet strong
'Tis only with you that I truly belong

I hope you feel the burning fire
That love produces in my soul
Your glance, your smile, it brings me higher
Keep me close and don't let go

My heart's in your hand, you have all my trust
Not one person or thing can seperate us

I close my eyes, with satisfaction, I sleep
You belong to me, and I'm yours to keep

© 2010 Alli-o


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Alli-o
um...help?

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I like the emotion in this poem. A very nice write. thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This isn't cheesy Alli-O. Keep this up. This is Transcendental.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Ian
oooo very nice this short poem tells a lot of your experience keep it up

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Alli-o
Alli-o

Pflugerville, TX



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