How Shall I Captivate You?

You can try me,

you won't deny me;

but how shall I captivate your spirit?

You abuse me,

you reuse me;

how shall I captivate your mind?

You bewitch me,

you enchant me;

how shall I captivate your love?

You confuse me,

you refuse me;

how shall I captivate your heart?

Of all the things you've put me through,

all I think about is you.

I've missed you always, every day!

I want your word,

say it's okay!

My love,

my life,

come back to me.

Return my heart,

just set me free!

Reviews

[Crysta]

I like this poem a lot, i hope he comes back to you, however, you're the only one who can set yourself free - because your world is your perspective of you...
also thought I would mention a spelling correction, " how shall I captivate you mind?"
should it be "How shall I captivate your mind?" just wondering if it was intentional,
thank you fro the write,
Crys

[Allyson Wolfe]

The concept of setting the heart free is not him coming back to the narrator, but rather them being able to still have each other in their lives without the irrational feelings having to do with their previous love. Thanks for the review!

[That_Guy]

I'm not sure but it's working so far haha

[Allyson Wolfe]

Haha! Well, I do suppose that was the response I was hoping for all along. thanks!

[That_Guy]

haha you're welcome