Sweeter Symphonies

And when I felt your touch,

oh love is just too much.

Nothing better than to hear

the sound of a gentle symphony

playing when I feel your touch.

Oh love, 

tell me,

are you sorry for this?

I've never had anything as sweet as your kiss.

There's nothing I could do

to stop myself from loving you.

My heart and my soul go out to you now,

Kisses like magic,

like guns,

pow pow.

Baby hold me sweet, 

be mine for life.

Love me forever,

not just for tonight.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Caradoc]

Hmm...A short and simple love poem. I wonder though at the question presented within. "Are you sorry for this?" It makes me think maybe an affair is taking place. I guess it could just be about a very good one night stand though, judging by the last two lines.

It's nice. Simple words to just convey a feeling. I would have to say the only thing I don't like in this piece is the line "pow pow". The way it sounds doesn't sit right with me. But I'm sure others will enjoy it.

Overall I would say this is good. Not one of your best, honestly, but good never the less.

-Caradoc