Not Very Good

Not Very Good

A Poem by Amata Luna

I'm not very good at most things but loving You


I’m not very good at math

That’s why I cannot count how much I love You

I’m not very good at physics

That’s why I don’t know how to measure the love I feel for You

I’m not very good at history

That’s why I cannot tell how I began to love You

What I know is that I’ve been good just on one thing

And that is loving You


I wish I’m very good at arts

So that I can paint Your face

I wish I’m very good at music

So that I can sing You praise

I wish I’m very good at language

So that I can tell You all

But all I know is You, that’s what I’m most proud of


All I know is Your grace, Your love and Your righteousness

All I know is that You made me and was perfectly formed in Your likeness

All I know is You know me and You knew who I’ll be before I’m born

So I’ll live my life to serve You, to serve the One who called




Amata Luna


© 2012 Amata Luna

Author's Note

Amata Luna
Thank you in advance for reading my work and reviewing it.

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Good poem. I like the change from normal formatting. It worked for this piece, because the objective was to see things differently (IMO). Nice descriptive of not knowing but knowing just the same. Keep it up.

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Posted 5 Years Ago

Very nice piece!

Posted 7 Years Ago

Oh wow.
Beautiful poem.
Really great work.
A very interesting write. It has a very happy kind of vibe to it.
Love it.

Posted 7 Years Ago

A romantic, heart felt write:)

Posted 7 Years Ago

This is a very beautiful piece. It's so sweet, and I really like how you compared it to other stuff. Well written :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

Forgot to rate.

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thats really good. So full of love. Keep up the great work.

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 12, 2012
Last Updated on February 12, 2012


Amata Luna
Amata Luna

I write when something brings me to it. I write when somebody pushes me into it. I write when things are sad and when things are not. I write when I'm inspired. To inspire, I write. To share is to wri.. more..

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A Poem by Amata Luna