A Riddle in a Poem

A Riddle in a Poem

A Poem by Amata Luna
"

So much for inspiration; how about a riddle once more? ;)

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My Riddle

in a Poem

 

Mine is the honey, yours is the skies

Mine is the grin, yours is the smile

Mine is the chocolate, yours is the milk

Mine’s the curiosity, my pleasure’s not just it

 

Red is fierce, fiery and ablaze

Yellow is sunny, happy and gale

Green is serene, funny and blue

Oh blue is the coolest, its color is true

 

Now I am combined

That’s the best you can say

I am yellow and blue

Serene and I’m gale

 

Yours might be the highlands

But mine is equal space

Maybe not, maybe true

Or maybe I don’t care

 

The sky is so blue

The sun sunny and pale

No clouds are above it

Birds are singing its praise

 

I won’t forget that day

When the sky have been closed

But you just don’t know what is it

Until you see it up close

 

 

 

 

Amata Luna

 

 

© 2012 Amata Luna


Author's Note

Amata Luna
I've run out of inspiration. So I'm "forced" to think. Hahaha. I don't know if you'll get the message in this. Or a bit of the original thought. I didn't focus on rhyming or what. I just let things write its own. (as if I can believe that) Anyway, have a good day and may you have at least some time worth reading it.

AL, 5/4/[email protected]:29 PM

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artistic construction in it
..can't guess any answer but this consist of good thoughts
=]

Posted 8 Years Ago


pretty amazing!
your poem is so cool! haha.
i specially love your description of colors...and when you combined yellow and blue, =green; thus, serene and gale. :)
This is very artistically written! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Whoa...I know, i randomly appear out of nowhere (sorry for that), but I love this riddle :). I can't think of anything though lol XD

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw...I can't think of any answer right now! Haha! But anyway, this is a creative and amazing poem/riddle...I enjoyed it...I'll try to think of an answer on this one!
:)))

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:) you're a talented writer.. even you're out of inspiration , still you have a passion to make new! hahaha .. love this.. XD i love riddles! it boost my brain abilities! :D thanks for sharing! :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hehehehe it was fun reading it!
Really interesting!
I still dont know the answer to your riddle! But i'll think for sure :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice writing, all the phrases are very amusing, I love it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's so cute and very inspiring.... I was thinking of the beach while reading this... heheheh great work..... =9

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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